(08-25-2015, 11:25 AM)Ghekre Feder Said: If I could make a suggestion to Trax, it would be to proof read your work for typos, missing spaces and other punctuational errors, and to stick more with witty trash talk and less with trying to explain yourself in your retorts. Sometimes you get side tracked and lose your sharp tongue because you're spending too much time explaining actions and whatnot instead of ripping into a guy.

I get everything you said to me besides this really, I mean, if an opponent brings up a point or asks a question, and I don't explain how they're wrong or answer said question, wouldn't that essentially be me ignoring their statement hence possibly losing points, I always thought a good defensive was just as good as a good offensive. If you don't mind, give me an example where I explained too much rather than trash talk, genuinally curious if it'll help me improve my RPs.


EDIT: Actually upon a self review I see what you're talking about,Lux even IC mentioned it in his RPs but I forgot lol, thanks for the pointers.

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