I'm going to be nice and give you some feedback and advice.

Personally, I haven't seen much of the character but he seems interesting. The best type of heel is the one who thinks he's right. A guy who says he's a valiant knight but is actually a complete dick, is a great idea. If that's what you're going for.

Also, this may sound weird but try not to use words like face or heel in character. This is a goofy fake wrestling site, but we still need a bit of kayfabe in RPs.

You're doing well though. Looking forward to seeing a real RP from you.