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Feedback for a Knight - AerialKnight - 08-21-2014
Since I've just released my first promo not too long ago, (in fact, I released it just just mere minutes ago) I'd like to know how I did and if you like how my character is coming along.
Here it is: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14540&pid=65576#pid65576
RE: Feedback for a Knight - AerialKnight - 08-21-2014
Thanks for the tips guys.
Feedback for a Knight - Gator - 08-21-2014
I'm going to be nice and give you some feedback and advice.
Personally, I haven't seen much of the character but he seems interesting. The best type of heel is the one who thinks he's right. A guy who says he's a valiant knight but is actually a complete dick, is a great idea. If that's what you're going for.
Also, this may sound weird but try not to use words like face or heel in character. This is a goofy fake wrestling site, but we still need a bit of kayfabe in RPs.
You're doing well though. Looking forward to seeing a real RP from you.
RE: Feedback for a Knight - AerialKnight - 08-21-2014
Quote:Also, this may sound weird but try not to use words like face or heel in character. This is a goofy fake wrestling site, but we still need a bit of kayfabe in RPs.
Yeah, that's my bad. I tried to use examples of 'good guys' in wrestling, but I couldn't really think of a good way to describe it at that time. Thanks for the feedback, though. It's well appreciated.