I'm extremely curious as to what some of you might think about my first RP. I know it's a bit lengthy, but it was a trial run. I think it was a hair over 3,000 words and I typically like to stay around 2,000, so it was about a 1,000 words longer than I wanted. I've not really wrote in this style in a long time and kind of wanted to get a feel for it again. So, good bad or indifferent, I'd like to hear what you have to say about it.

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=13685

"Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not."
~~Senator Robert F. Kennedy~~
"Let us not seek the Republican answer or the Democratic answer, but the right answer.
Let us not seek to fix the blame for the past. Let us seek
our own responsibility for the future."
~~President John Fitzgerald Kennedy~~

"The work begins anew. The hope rises again. And the dream lives on."
~~Senator Ted Kennedy~~

I'm pretty new, but I think your character and writing are better than most I've seen... although I actually live in Florida and KNOW who the governor is.

(p.s. I'd rather have Niko than Rick Scott)

well, when I lived in Florida we had Jeb Bush... so there's that... and thank you

"Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not."
~~Senator Robert F. Kennedy~~
"Let us not seek the Republican answer or the Democratic answer, but the right answer.
Let us not seek to fix the blame for the past. Let us seek
our own responsibility for the future."
~~President John Fitzgerald Kennedy~~

"The work begins anew. The hope rises again. And the dream lives on."
~~Senator Ted Kennedy~~

Jeb > Scott. Real talk.

Charlie Crist 4 lyfe.

Pretty good