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Do I Deserve To Be Here
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Paul Heyman
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04-14-2015, 08:50 AM

If you're going to bitch and whine about losing, then no, you don't deserve to be here. You win some, you lose some. It's just the nature of the game. You have to get used to it.

Here's your feedback: First of all, one or two hundred words, no matter who you're against, besides maybe a no show, will rarely get you a win. Secondly, you need to structure these RP's. It's a bunch of quotes all running together. Look at your opponent, well written, well structured, easy on the eyes, easy to read. That's a huge contrast to what you put out this week.

Strive for quality. I don't know if you wrote your work on a cell phone or what, but it looks all smashed together. No structure. No style. Basic spoken word promo with little substance and hardly any weight.

Anyone that knows me, knows that I don't really pull any punches when it comes to people openly complaining about losing. How you think you won this week is beyond me. You have a ton of room for improvement. I'd suggest rather than focusing on losing a match, you figure out a way to get in the game we play and improve yourself.
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Messages In This Thread
Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Muddy Waters - 04-14-2015, 03:48 AM
re:Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Vincent Lane - 04-14-2015, 09:17 AM
re:Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Mr. Oz - 04-14-2015, 09:27 AM
Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Paul Heyman - 04-14-2015, 08:50 AM
Do I Deserve To Be Here - by John_Black - 04-14-2015, 02:27 PM
re:Do I Deserve To Be Here - by Mastermind - 04-14-2015, 04:47 PM



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