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Debut roleplay feedback please
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Vincent Lane Offline
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04-03-2015, 06:59 AM

I think it's quite good.

I like the swerve from thinking I was reading a gang member-style character to some kid playing video games. The style and layout are good, the pacing is well done, and the dialogue is realistic.

I'm curious to see more.
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re:Debut roleplay feedback please - by Vincent Lane - 04-03-2015, 06:59 AM



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