It was good and I thought the emotions and internal struggle within Alexandra was conveyed very realistic and heartfelt but I think you could have explained or embellished more on why Alexandra was escaping a gathering of people. Who they were, why they were there, or at the very least, where she was and why she was there. Instead of just leaving it at, that she was climbing out onto a roof in order to wait for everyone to leave. It left a lot to just the imagination and while I'm a fan of when an rp can leave you wondering and curious as to what's going happen next, leaving too much to the imagination isn't always the best. Nothing a follow up rp couldn't fix though. The ending was a nice twist with Alexandra revealing she isn't human and had wings that saved her from certain death and I felt it left off with just the right amount of expectation for the next installment. All in all it was enjoyable and I liked it. I'd just work on your set up and try explaining more in depth what's going on, rather then leaving so much to the imagination .