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10-04-2013, 03:48 AM

Hate I didn't get around to this until now but I thought it was good. Small yet you told a good story and continued with the saga of Zak / Radio / Minxs etc...

One small suggestion is that instead of using that red you used...maybe use a brighter color. It was just a little hard for me to read at first that's all.

But I love reading your work and other than what I mentioned...I seen nothing really wrong with. Smile
To find John, turn those lights out because he will then appear...
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quick feedback please? - by Mr. Radio - 09-29-2013, 06:40 PM
quick feedback please? - by John Austin - 10-04-2013, 03:48 AM



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