I never was good at feedback, but I'm trying for you. You asked so nicely. Lol.

Okay, so... It's well done. The "plot" of it is set out perfectly. All is in order there, and the words spoken by the Twisted Angel were more than solid. Repetition used to enforce a point. I was only confused when I glanced away (kinda tired) and looked back. Could've sworn I was reading what I'd already read, but I wasn't. Lol

Yeah, so... I'm not great at spotting the flaws in people's work. Great RP, overall. If I could find something that needed to be worked on, perhaps some words were repeated quite a bit, but that's a struggle we all face... I'm rather bad with it, actually. I'm digging, but I'm not finding issues with this RP. Loved it.

How come all the weird kinky stuff in the world reminds you people of me!?