Really liked all three pieces, but there's two complaints that I have with them. I'll air them here, if I may.

1. Using colored text for dialogue is good and fine (I use it for all my dialogue, except small characters, fuck them) but using colored text and putting the character whose text color it is' name with it is overkill. Pet peeve, really.

2. The subtle actions in the middle of pieces of dialogue could use more in the vain of splitting the paragraph into two, and giving the action a line on its own. Again, pet peeve.

So yeah, my two cents on the matter.

I think I'm broke by now though.