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Feedback wanted! Act VII: Origins (Feedback)
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Taylor Mayde Offline
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10-27-2017, 08:52 AM

"Mr. Kuhn,

I share the above sentiments that your storytelling is amazing. Trash Talk needs to come a little bit harder it felt like you were almost scrambling the counter all of the points Cadryn made and by the second one it seems like you almost backed into a corner in that department. If This Were storytelling contest you would have won in my opinion because like the gentleman above said it was phenomenal, I really felt like I was into the story and really felt like I was there and a part of it. Try to be a little bit more intense with your trash talk because it came off not only as if you were just trying to counter but a little soft in my opinion. Overall though you've been putting out good work that I have seen browsing through the boards and you can only go up from here. Best of luck to you and I look forward to reading future work."
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Act VII: Origins (Feedback) - by Finn Kühn - 10-27-2017, 07:11 AM
re:Act VII: Origins (Feedback) - by Taylor Mayde - 10-27-2017, 08:52 AM



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