Quote:Hey guys!

So I did it! I finally have a match and I made my first promo! I have been featured on Chris Chaos promo's, but this was my first SOLO one. Lemme know what you think!

The writing is great, as usual, but on the specific character development there seems to be a little disconnect between ^ Jenny and Promo Jenny.

I don't feel the same bimbotic/slutty feel off Jenny that you seem to want to build from her promo, she seems way too serious, way too eloquent and and just no as giggly you know?

Otherwise I don't think males and females really speak too differently, it's all in the character. I feel like Jenny is the epitome of every female stereotype we can come up with, and in her promo against ravenwolf I just didn't feel it.