I really liked it. You seem to really have a good grasp on your character and where you want to take her, but more importantly, how you're going to get her there. I also liked how it clearly shows that you researched Frodo, Rebel, and even me to get our styles and mannerisms down. You had some pretty good one-liners there, too, like the line about Rebel trying to call someone a Barbie given her origins. That was awesome.

I look forward to seeing what you'll cook up next.