I would love some feedback on my newest roleplay. I'm hoping to continue with a full series of roleplays that would read more like a book. Right now, all segments from Zak's account will be based on what is happening to the men in the new world. Soon, I will start doing the same story but from the view of Micah and what happens with the women in the new world.

Here is the link: A New World (1)

Also, if people like the story and wish to play a roll in the story, please let me know. I have several people I still have to talk to about how their characters would eventually play a key roll towards the end.

Please...Enjoy.