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09-29-2013, 06:40 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=7100&pid=28148#pid28148 it was kind of small but i was short on time so can I have some thoughts on it?
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10-04-2013, 03:48 AM

Hate I didn't get around to this until now but I thought it was good. Small yet you told a good story and continued with the saga of Zak / Radio / Minxs etc...

One small suggestion is that instead of using that red you used...maybe use a brighter color. It was just a little hard for me to read at first that's all.

But I love reading your work and other than what I mentioned...I seen nothing really wrong with. Smile
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