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Feedback - I Slipped Up - Smoke - 09-14-2013
I got very ill, very fast this weekend, but I wanted to have something up for Shove-It, so here it is.
Part 1
Part 2
Finale
I particularly wanted feedback to make sure it was alright. I couldn't think of anything extravagant or detailed, which is why it's just me talking and bashing people and what-not. I should be better enough to have improved work for Wednesday (and lord I hope so
)Any and all feedback appreciated.