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Feedback on RP - Jason E Smith - 07-10-2013
Into the Unknown
I would just like to know some thoughts on my latest RP I have not wrote a RP in a couple weeks so I am interested to see what people think
Cheers in advance
Feedback on RP - "The Phantom" Jack Kronus - 07-11-2013
I think that it lacked some description, but I did like the dialogue. I would like to read more of your work.
Feedback on RP - John Austin - 07-11-2013
Like stated, just a tad more description and you are good to go man
Feedback on RP - Shawn Steele - 07-11-2013
Agreed with the previous two opinions. A bit more description would be fantastic. Dialogue is good, but I think it too could be a bit more detailed.
Feedback on RP - Jason E Smith - 07-11-2013
Thanks everyone for your feedback much appreciated