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Feedback Please? - ShawnHero - 05-20-2013
Hello everyone. Could I have feedback on this roleplay? I'd like to know how I'm doing because it's been hella rough trying to get back into roleplaying after being away from it for so long. I'd greatly appreciate any feedback (:
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2777
Feedback Please? - KnightMask - 05-20-2013
One of my favorite things about it is that your life as a wrestler is blended together with the rest of his life. Some guys, they tell stories about their characters that don't ultimately connect back to their lives as wrestlers. So, they'll do promos or interviews that are completely disconnected from what their characters are going through in their lives as revealed to us in the rest of their post.
The fact that he was like, "Oh, interview today," I loved that touch. So he's going into the interview with all the emotions and feelings that we just saw him experience in the rest of the post.
RE: Feedback Please? - Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-20-2013
(05-20-2013, 01:41 PM)KnightMask Said: One of my favorite things about it is that your life as a wrestler is blended together with the rest of his life. Some guys, they tell stories about their characters that don't ultimately connect back to their lives as wrestlers. So, they'll do promos or interviews that are completely disconnected from what their characters are going through in their lives as revealed to us in the rest of their post.
The fact that he was like, "Oh, interview today," I loved that touch. So he's going into the interview with all the emotions and feelings that we just saw him experience in the rest of the post.
Quit stealing the words out of my mouth!
RE: Feedback Please? - ShawnHero - 05-20-2013
(05-20-2013, 01:41 PM)KnightMask Said: One of my favorite things about it is that your life as a wrestler is blended together with the rest of his life. Some guys, they tell stories about their characters that don't ultimately connect back to their lives as wrestlers. So, they'll do promos or interviews that are completely disconnected from what their characters are going through in their lives as revealed to us in the rest of their post.
The fact that he was like, "Oh, interview today," I loved that touch. So he's going into the interview with all the emotions and feelings that we just saw him experience in the rest of the post.
Thanks man, I really appreciate this. (: