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Feedback please - Dolly Waters - 10-05-2016

Not sure how I feel about this one. Comments and thoughts are appreciated:

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=25032


re:Feedback please - Vincent Lane - 10-05-2016

Did you mean to post this twice?


Feedback please - Dolly Waters - 10-05-2016

No, not sure how that happened. My bad


re:Feedback please - The Monster of Htaed - 10-08-2016

I liked it, honestly, I think you write Paul Heyman's character in real life you do such a good job with his promo's representing your character Dolly Waters, I feel like I am watching him in WWE when he first showed up in WWE. You have a lot of talent no denying that you keep it enjoyable, and never overboard with useless information. I personally can never write a real life person character, I'm terrible at it, so my hat is off to you for that. Hope any of the feedback was useful.