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obvious help needed - BrianLance - 01-21-2016
in light of my totally unacceptable attempt at a come back is failing horribly. I would like to hear what it will take to get right. I am in no way blaming anyone other then myself for this failure. I know my style is extremely outdated and that don't help matters. Please send me any ideas that might help. Thanks and I have to say sorry for not putting in the work I'm used to doing and known for. This match should have been so much better but I feel my lacking RPS drugged it down into what seemed like a meat match to me. please dont let this seem like a bitch session thing just not happy with my effort and would like to know how to pick it up and get right again.
obvious help needed - Morbid Angel - 01-21-2016
You have a PM
obvious help needed - Mia Dim - 01-21-2016
I would try to make the promo cutting parts sound less generic. A lot of it reminded me of a script that they would throw at Randy Orton to memorize for the camera.
Send in a crazy segment or attack someone on the shows, that way you show that your character has certain goals and it gives you something other than your opponents to talk about. I had Dim attacking people in weird/racist/homophobic ways for several weeks just so I could write about some shit besides my match.
re:obvious help needed - BrianLance - 01-21-2016
Thanks guys think i might got a grip on where i need to improve and what needs to be done. Thanks again