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One of Us. Feedback, please. - Nico LaVey - 07-20-2015
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=20790
PlasterPikeNike, I didn't read your advice until after I finished the promo. I wasn't ignoring your advice, I was just a bit late to reading it..
One of Us. Feedback, please. - Roxy Cotton - 07-20-2015
I enjoyed it. I think I brought out the best you've shown so far in you.
I'm never a huge fan of "trash talk only" promos, but they are what they are, and yours wasn't bad at all.
re:One of Us. Feedback, please. - Nico LaVey - 07-20-2015
Thanks. Nico just feels a lot more natural than Lucius. I loved Lucius as a character, but I never could figure out the next thing I should write. With Nico, I feel like i'm always thinking 3 steps ahead.